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  1. Nimajin

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    So once again, i would your opinions.

    I tried editing a little CoD clip. (Ignore the fact that it's CoD -_-)



    The original clip:
     
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    #1 Nimajin, Apr 24, 2014
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    Needs more lens flare, sample text, mountain dew and doritos.

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  3. Nimajin

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    I was originally gonna use some lens flares, but i actually wanted to train myself so that i can get better.
     
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    #3 Nimajin, Apr 24, 2014
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    The slow mo part seemed a bit long. Otherwise, good.
     
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    Alright, thanks!
     
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    #5 Nimajin, Apr 24, 2014
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    Was hoping for something more like this



    Other than that, good video. Feedback would be like choose better fonts (that fit the video) and as Joe said, shorten the Slow-mo
     
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    #6 Backseatsman, Apr 24, 2014
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    Alright, thanks again, i will try to improve on these things.
     
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    #7 Nimajin, Apr 24, 2014
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    Really good, but the slow mo part is a little long.
     
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    #8 RunningSpree, Apr 24, 2014
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    As everyone above mentioner the slowmo is a bit to long, personally i think after the round was fired and it was offical thekill was achieved the reload isnt neccesarily important to theclip, after the shot was fired then gradually speed it back up till where the new bullet in the chamber is almost at full speed
     
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    Looks great:)
     
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